Sunday, April 18, 2010

The Effects of Toddy(Spatial/Visual)

    Toddy is a alcoholic beverage created from the sap of various species of palm tree such as the Palmyra, and coconut palms. However, toddy is not good. Why?
    Toddy might cause familial problems, such as when one becomes drunk and violent, thus beating up his/her family members. Yes. That also includes one's parents and children! Imagine waking up after a night of toddy and finding your family members unconscious! That would be so scary!
    Another problem might be one's health problem. Although people might have the assumption that alcoholic beverage can make one become less worry, toddy causes headaches, and it is bad for one's immune system. You would not want to fall sick just because of your worries, right?
    Also, alcoholic beverages are expensive. You would not want to spend $10 on just a small cup of toddy that can be drank in one tiny gulp, do you? Anyway, even if you want to, think about your family members. Do you have the ability to spend $100 - 10 tiny gulps of toddy for a day? That adds up to $3000 a month! This means that even if you earn $6000, you got only $3000 left! That's 50% of your pay! You certainly cannot afford such a thing....  
    If you still do not think that the above reasons for one to stop drinking toddy are enough, let me add one more. Social problem. Would you like to sit face to face with some body that smells of toddy? Will that be pleasant? The answer would obviously be 'No'! So, if you still drinks toddy, how is your boss or employee going to feel? Soon, you woud be kicked out of the company! Then, you will have no more money to spend on toddy.
    In conclusion, drinking toddy is unhealthy for yourself and you might beat up your family members unintentionly, lose much money due to toddy and worse still, get fired and left with no money! Thus, DO NOT drink toddy!
     

2 comments:

  1. Nice scare tactics used! I am sure many people might stop drinking after reading your report. The fact about how getting addicted to drinking can get you into trouble, it is really scary. However, I believe pictures should be inserted to liven your report and people will bother to read it.

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  2. Great work! The tone you used in your blog post was very suitable and very persuasive. I'm sure many alchoholics would definitely turn over a new leaf after reading your report. Good job!!

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