Full of up and downs
You fall or succeed
Try to survive the blow you get
Punching and wrestling
One will win the match
One will surely fall
And life will be over
Slowly and steadily
You will lose once
And that
Will be your last day on Earth
Tuesday, July 27, 2010
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Why is all ur poems "life is like a ......"
ReplyDeleteYou copied the poem from Xinyi
Singlish is like a tree poem.
I have only one comment, which is the last stanza. You probably have misunderstood the topic because it desribes "life and death" rather than "life". But "life" is well illustrated in the other two stanzas. Not bad.
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